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I am doing this for a speech project,I just want to know what other people think about it. The format is kinda wired I know with the, Today I have gone over, and now im going to talk to you about. But are teacher gave us a format so there is nothing I can do to change that. Also let me know if a piece of Information is way off, or there is way to improve it. This is not a major grade so I just went with the info I already knew from showing, and looked up a few key points to make sure the info was some what correct.
Many people will do just about anything to win, and if drugs are there answer, there do it. Today I’m going to talk to you about the use of illegal drugs in horses. I’m going to go over the history, types of drugs ,uses and the consequences.
Drugs have been used in horses to enhance performance since 1961. The first drug test was developed in 1976, after many cases of drug abuse in the show ring .Today AQHA alone spends over 1 million dollars on drug test yearly. The test are often given to the winning horses who are most likely to test positive. Test are also given randomly to try to denture people to use drugs. Today almost all large breeder associations use some form of drug testing.

Now I’m going to talk to you about the types of drugs and their effect on the horses. Opiate is used in race horses to pump up the adrenalin and make them go faster. Steroids are used in halter horses to increase muscle mass quickly. Pain killers are used in lame horses in order to continue showing when injured . Tranquilizers are used in western pleasure horses to make them go slower. They are also used in young horses who are starting training, this makes the trainers job easier. Alcohol is ejected into the base of a horses tail to numb it, this is often known as blocking.. When showing if you horse gives a sign of resistance, such as tail movement you will get points taken off. Blocking assures the horse will not swish there tail when you give them a cue.

The consequence for using drugs in horses in minimal. Most trainers caught using a mild drug in their horses will get a fine. If someone is caught using a more severe drug they can get 1 -2 years penalty from showing. This can be devastating to a trainer’s carrier. Horse’s side effects are much worse. When steroids are used on halter horses the horse’s upper body out grows their legs. This causes the horse to come lame very easily. When pain killers are used in race horses the result can be devastating, the horse continues to run full speed without feeling any pain, the result is broken legs, or even death. When blocking is used the horse will have no or very little felling of there tail. There are now test at high level shows to insure the horses tail has not been blocked. The only way to reverse a blocked tail is a complicated nerve surgery, or laser treatment.

Today I have gone over the History of drugs, consequences, and types and uses. Its true that people will do anything to win, even it that means endangering their horses with illegal drugs. Even though drugs are commonly used behind the sense at horse shows, it is frowned upon by many people.

Thanks!;)
Thanks, spelling is not my thing lol. Even with spell check;)
Im in 8th grade

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I am applying to the Master’s in social Work program because my goal is to improve the lives and enhance the well being of individuals who are often discriminated, disadvantaged, and poor. I want to help others maximize their potential and steer their lives in a positive direction. I am particularly concerned about helping change the lives of our most vulnerable individuals, troubled and neglected youth. Therefore, I want to become a social worker to make a positive difference in their lives and empower these individuals to help them function more effectively with their problems.
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I had a mentor that taught and guided me with in my life. The impact that she had on my life inspired me to want to help others. I want to use the knowledge and understanding I have gained to assist people in changing their lives. I believe education is the key to being able to do that. Specifically, a Master’s degree in Social Work would put me in the greatest position for achieving my goal. A social worker on Skid Row in Los Angeles started me on a path toward healing my own life. She provided me with constant support and a sense of hope. Six months later, I found a job as a youth counselor at H.V. Group Home, a residential treatment facility, working with incarcerated youth who were mostly minorities. I am deeply concerned by the high incarceration rates in our society, specifically the way youth lead the way in going to jail, rather than being productive individuals in society. It is my sincere hope to contribute on how to best counsel and care for at risk youth. My research interest focuses on juveniles, especially those at risk spending their young adulthood behind bars.
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